思君

雨中梧桐

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">思君</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">春伤残红乱，石桥折柳别。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">愁思已不堪，花下舞蜂蝶。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">君去音信杳，野菊开又谢。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">几欲托锦书，又恐君夜归。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">问君在何处，远隔数重山。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">思君情切切，追昔意绵绵。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">佳人丛中笑，梅自洁与傲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">对月常举杯，冷酒入肠结。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">想思无人诉，未语泪先流。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">夜深凭栏倚，寒侵衣袖湿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">寂寂星低吟，沉沉月欲昏。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">蛙鼓业已停，独我梦难成。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">寄情皎皎月，传至君梦侧。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">不知君梦里，倩影是何人？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">待到君归日，定要紧想问。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p>

雨中梧桐

呵呵,感谢众位的点评,作品本来源于生活而高于生活,很多时候我们写些心情文字,莫不因点及面,如浸过水的宣纸,一点墨汁就能晕染大片.

凌烟如雪

雨奴好心境，呵呵。

雪夜梦飘

<p>此情可待成追忆．．．．．</p><p></p>

简简豆

<p>君问归期未有期,巴山夜雨涨秋池,</p><p>何当共剪西窗烛,却话巴山夜雨时.</p><p>突然想起来的一首诗,也不确定打错字没,以和.</p>

雪夜梦飘

<p>红藕香残玉簟秋。<br/>轻解罗裳，<br/>独上兰舟。<br/>云中谁寄锦书来？<br/>雁字回时，<br/>月满西楼。<br/><br/>花自飘零水自流。<br/>一种相思，<br/>两处闲愁。<br/>此情无计可消除，<br/>才下眉头，<br/>却上心头。<br/></p><p></p><p>女人,自古以来都这么命苦啊?</p>

简简豆

<p>呵呵,我觉得不是不是,只是谴词叠句消闲修文,与命苦无关哦[s:4]</p><p></p>

凌烟如雪

且思君颜唤尘落，星月昏沉呼千心。

寂静雨季

<p>楼主!</p><p>等不到就算了。.换个把.</p><p><strong><font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\">蜂蝶野菊拦秋月,</font></strong></p><p><strong><font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\">梧桐雨中欲断魂.</font></strong></p><p><strong><font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\">河间芳草年年绿,</font></strong></p><p><strong><font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\">君若不归即换人.</font></strong></p><p><strong><font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\">                          阅楼主大作批示.20070526秋月烟花</font></strong></p><p><strong><font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\"></font></strong></p><p></p>

凌烟如雪

<p>思念岂能做惘然。</p>

gemini

<p>同上</p>

xyy81063

月满西楼都上来了厉害人哦

简简豆

主贴精彩,回帖也精彩.继续~~

990220085

<span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt;\"><p>其实我 记得有一首诗作者是金昌绪，诗名叫什么的忘记了好像是《闺怨》的</p><p>不知道对不对</p><p>、全诗是这样的     打起黄莺儿，莫叫枝上啼</p><p>                    啼时惊妾梦，不得到辽西</p><p>还有一首元曲作者是姚燧<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 9pt;\"><font color=\"#098888\"><br/></font><strong><font color=\"#098880\"><i><big>              越调.凭栏人.寄征衣<br/><br/></big></i></font></strong><table cellspacing=\"5\" cellpadding=\"0\" width=\"100%\" border=\"0\"><tbody><tr><td><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><p></p><p align=\"justify\" style=\"TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 27px;\"><font face=\"宋体\" size=\"3\">欲寄君衣君不还，不寄君衣君又寒。寄与不寄间，妾身难上难</font></p><p align=\"justify\" style=\"TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 27px;\">写这种诗的可以参考一下下          </p></td></tr></tbody></table></span></p></span>