<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">启事:《土家族文学》杂志“新荷看台”栏目在</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;">2006</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">年秋季号重点推出网络作家巴山素女的一组散文《朵朵花裤》之后,产生了较好的反响。现冬季号组稿在即,本期拟重点推出网络诗人秦风的一大组新诗佳作,现贴于此地,请各位文友给予点评,本刊将择优选发。每篇点评文章限于四百字内,短小精悍。</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: black;"><br/> <p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; 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